request

So, I need someone who is not me to read over a fic I wrote today. It's about 4250 words of outside pov on the Avengers movieverse, starring OCs with cameos from a few familiar faces. I did not intend for it to get so long but the story kept saying, Nope, not finished yet.

And I am not at all sure it makes sense outside my head, or that the narrator experiences genuine growth, instead of me just saying, Here's what should've happened. *hands*

Any takers?

comment_fic 919-923: TW, Avengers, Little Mermaid, HL

Title: the sunshine is a glorious birth
Fandom: Teen Wolf (TV)
Disclaimer: not my characters; title from Wordsworth
Warnings: spoilers for up to the end of season 3; mentions of bad things; minor character death
Pairings: gen
Rating: PG
Wordcount:460
Point of view: third
Prompt: Teen Wolf, Talia + Derek, there's stranger who has her blood and tells her of a dark future


( She knows him immediately, through scent and through sight. )

Title: the miracle is coming back from the last war alive
Fandom: Avengers movieverse
Disclaimer: not my characters; title from James Humphrey
Warnings: post-Winter Soldier; talk of death/violence/torture
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 210
Point of view: third
Prompt: Any, any, Your mind is the scene of the crime. (Inception)


( He remembers falling. )

Title: When looking westward, I beheld a something
Fandom: Avengers movieverse
Disclaimer: not my characters; title from Coleridge
Warnings: post-Winter Soldier; self-deprecating narration; AUish, mishmash backstory for both Clint&Natasha
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 475
Point of view: third
Prompt: MCU:Avengers (canon or AU), Hawkeye, "The story of a nobody who saved everybody." (The Lego Movie Tagline)



( Clint knows that he shouldn't be on <i>this</i> team -- the smartest men in the world, Captain America, an alien warrior prince, and Tasha, the most dangerous of them all.. )

Title: what monsters fear
Fandom: The Little Mermaid (Disney)
Disclaimer: not my characters
Warnings: dark AU; implied very bad things
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 220
Point of view: third
Prompt: any, any, spirit of dark and lonely water


( There are things that sleep in the deep. )

Title: of choices
Fandom: Highlander
Disclaimer: not my characters
Warnings: major character death
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 100
Point of view: third
Prompt: Highlander, Methos, dilemma


( It comes down to his life or another’s. )