request

[tigriswolf]

So, I need someone who is not me to read over a fic I wrote today. It's about 4250 words of outside pov on the Avengers movieverse, starring OCs with cameos from a few familiar faces. I did not intend for it to get so long but the story kept saying, Nope, not finished yet.

And I am not at all sure it makes sense outside my head, or that the narrator experiences genuine growth, instead of me just saying, Here's what should've happened. *hands*

Any takers?