ext_6145 ([identity profile] crimsonsenya.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tigriswolf 2006-11-26 11:23 pm (UTC)

Please, tell me there will be more of this 'verse!

I've always thought Devour would make a perfect crossover with SPN and that only thing more angsty, needy, hooking, and hotter than Dean&Sam would be Dean&Sam&Jake. And YOU PROVED ME RIGHT.

I liked the flow of this fic, how you moved the plot forward, and how you integrated the Wendigo family and Michael & his brother in the story. The hum or bond you created between the three guy made my spine tingle, and Jake's "self-exorcism" was a perfect way both to free him from Marisol's influence and connect the mytharcs of Devour and SPN together.

If I can give you a bit of concrit. Your style is quite sparse on description of the surroundings/atmosphere. Though it worked for this story very well.

I repeat: Please, write a sequel! It is wrong to get us immersed into this exciting universe, and then not write more. It's like giving the reader divine crack and suddenly cutting the supply! ;)

*draws hearts all over the fic*

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