screaming loud enough to turn back the wind

God, that was awesome. Bone-chilling and beautiful. That's a very original and cool idea for a fic, and the way you've written it is so concise and dense that it doesn't need fleshing out for the reader to see between the lines. I love how you mixed in the conversation between the paragraphs to keep us on edge.

Of course, I'm dying for what happens next, but I like where you ended it. The rest is up to Kripke, I guess.