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lonely for something to touch
 
 
            They’re dangerous, the Winchesters, both on the edge. Gordon tells them he has the hunt taken care of, knowing they’ll show up anyway because Dean is looking for something to kill and he hasn’t yet slipped over into killing people.
            Gordon’s glad for that when they save his life, and he invites them out for a drink. 
            Dean’s dangerous, a hunter like Gordon, but Sam is squeamish, constantly pulling in Dean’s instincts, chaining him. Dean loves the kid, though, so he can’t see it.
            Gordon needs to convince Dean to ditch his little brother, come with him. He can hone what John Winchester(scary bastard) started. Dean could become the greatest hunter in America, if he got rid of Sam’s stifling presence.
            It’ll be hard, but Gordon’s never shied away from a challenge. 





you whom the funeral cannot kill
 
            He knows it’s wrong, that he should have left her dead in the ground. But he’s loved her for so long, he couldn’t imagine a world without her.
            Neal brought Angela back from death, from the grave, and she’s so beautiful. He holds her like he never could before, when she was alive and he was just friend Neal, a brother. He holds her, kisses her, strokes her hair, makes love to her. It’s better than all those times he imagined it.
            But something still feels wrong. He’s played with the natural order, and nothing good will come of it.
            He chases those thoughts away and kisses Angela. 






a sweet dream when the long trick’s over
 
            Andy’s never applied himself in scholarly pursuits—never saw the need. He didn’t have any plans or dreams for the future; now’s always been enough.
            His ability—out of the blue, one day—is another toy, a way to get anything he wants. He doesn’t use it to hurt people, so there’s nothing wrong.
            The car following him is sweet, such a gorgeous ride. He wants to drive her so much—and the guy inside is a looker, too. Shame Andy doesn’t swing that way.
            He’ll just take the car for a minute, leave her somewhere obvious.
            No one’ll get hurt. 





Watcher
 
for Mom
 
                They’re fighting again. Always fighting. They’re too much alike, I can tell. This time, it’s about a hunt young Joanna wants to go on, instead of a boy.
                My girl Ellen has always scared off any males coming around. She can be quite the terrifying woman. Joanna has never understood her mother, but I remember those days after her William died. She never even got to see his body, to say goodbye.
                I never forget. For me, all the past is yesterday.
                Joanna wants her own life, to honor her father’s memory. I can see, though, that she lacks the stomach for it. She thinks herself brave and strong, but I knew her as a child.
                Ellen has the right of it, but she’s going about it the wrong way. Commands have never worked on young Joanna.
                Oh, and here come those Winchester boys again. Lord, how I wish I could sigh.
 

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Date: 2008-03-28 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
lonely for something to touch

Good Gordon POV. I like the touch of creepy as he plans how to make Dean into his own image.

you whom the funeral cannot kill

The Neal POV works well, the way he gets what he wanted but knows it’s not right and can’t help himself anyway.

a sweet dream when the long trick’s over

I like how you show Andy taking baby steps, thinking there’s nothing wrong with using his power for his own goals.

Watcher

Intriguing outsider POV. I especially like this bit:

Ellen has the right of it, but she’s going about it the wrong way. Commands have never worked on young Joanna.

Yeah, I can definitely see Jo chafing against orders from a young age.

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Date: 2008-03-28 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kriptkeeper.livejournal.com
Cool little drabbles! Your Gordon is creepy, kind of stalker-like, which fits perfectly with the canon! The Neal and Andy are terrific POVs, letting us see into their mindsets. And I love the description of the fight that we didn't completely see in "No Exit." Great job!

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Date: 2008-05-19 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
It's scary, Gordon could have been a big, bad influence on Dean. Good thing he has Sam.

Perfect Neal.

Perfect Andy. Wished he had lived (but then again who does - movie reference).

Good insights on the Ellen/Jo catfight. I love that, they have some great one-liners to fling at each other.

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Date: 2008-05-19 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Can you guess the movie reference?

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Date: 2008-05-19 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Blade Runner. It was one of the influences on BSG, Edward James Olmos is in both.

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Date: 2008-05-19 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
You should see it sometime, it's pretty good. Not the best movie ever, but still. It's basically a noir novel on the screen, with replicants. The line, "It's a pity she won't live, but then again who does," is from Edward James Olmos' character Gaff, it's semi-famous in genre movie fandom.

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Date: 2008-05-19 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
And it takes place in 2019, just like Dark Angel. There's even a piano-playing character named Rachael.

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Date: 2008-08-23 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
These were fantastic!

*hugs*

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