beta request

I have a little SN ficlet I need someone to read over.  I can't decide if the little introduction/closing paragraphs work or not.  The summary is Five lies John told Dean about Mary, and one truth.  It's PG and a little over a thousand words long.

Any takers?

Secretly I love you, whom they think I have abjured - SN fic - R

Before it gets completely Kripke'd, I'll go ahead and post.  *hee*






Title: Secretly I love you, whom they think I have abjured

Fandom: “Supernatural”

Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun. Title from Denies Levertov.

Warnings: twisted; spoilers for aired season four; AUish

Pairings: none stated

Rating: R

Wordcount: 1465

Point of view: third

 

( In Hell, you’d sell your soul for a sip of water if you hadn’t already lost it playing cards )