untitled, weird-ass poem I wrote yesterday

So, the first line popped into my head.  The rest flowed, off and on, for the next four(ish) hours.  It currently has no title.  tigris_lilsis told me she liked it (though she thought it went on for too long, but what she told me was the stopping point was not the end), and while I like, too... I feel really weird about it.

 

( If I were a poem, I'd be the kind to break your heart. )