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Title: Heaven’s afflicting thunder
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun. Title from Milton(Paradise Lost, specifically. Appropriate, no?)
Warnings: spoilers for 4.7
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 215
Point of view: third
Notes: I sat down to write my canon drabble; this came out instead. It’s too much speculation for that series, but as a stand-alone? I like it.

 

So, this is the one. Tall, full of power, full of rage and pain, full of… love?

Castiel pauses, cataloging what all he had believed of Sam Winchester before standing in his presence. He knows Dean, and had known of Sam—everyone knows of Sam, but so few have been able to get near him…

Only Dean’s proximity allows it now.

And you think to let him live? Uriel asks, disbelief tingeing the words. He is a threat to all we know, brother.

I think, Castiel responds, that to kill him would be a far greater mistake than allowing him to keep the life that Our Father gave him.

It is a small reproof, but Uriel flinches.

Castiel brings his focus back to Sam, who has begun to look uncomfortable. Castiel realizes he still holds Sam’s hand.

It is not the hand of a monster, or of a savior. It is the hand of a human male who has worked hard, who is physically capable.

Dropping Sam’s hand, Castiel glances at Dean. There is a warning in his eyes. Uriel says, He believes he can harm us?

No, Castiel corrects him, acknowledging Dean—the man he carried out of Hell, the only human he has ever considered an equal—with a nod, he knows he can.

he knows he can...

Date: 2008-10-31 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catdancerz.livejournal.com
wow...

i keep saying that in response to this episode and its codas...wow...wow...wow...

so many layers unveiled, the angels fighting in heaven just like the demons in hell...

and sam's pride and uriel's arrogance...

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Date: 2008-10-31 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixel-0.livejournal.com
Ah, so good. Love the dynamics in this one. Very nice job. :)

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Date: 2008-10-31 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unbreakableburr.livejournal.com
HOMG, yes. Yes, yes, yes.
Awesome.

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Date: 2008-10-31 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Ooh, very nicely done. I really like Castiel's take on both Sam and Dean.

Favorite lines:

I think, Castiel responds, that to kill him would be a far greater mistake than allowing him to keep the life that Our Father gave him.

Love this.

He believes he can harm us?

No, Castiel corrects him, acknowledging Dean—the man he carried out of Hell, the only human he has ever considered an equal—with a nod, he knows he can.


Great ending.

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Date: 2008-10-31 09:49 am (UTC)
ext_9352: (brothers)
From: [identity profile] charlie-d-blue.livejournal.com
-everyone knows of Sam,

This was just note-perfect, and that aside in particular made me somewhat inexplicably gleeful.

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Date: 2008-10-31 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unbreakableburr.livejournal.com
You're welcome!

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Date: 2008-11-01 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] julorean.livejournal.com
:squees: This is a really nice litte piece from Castiel. He's right tho. Sam is...just Sam. And good call on not killing him, Dean would probably make Lucifer look like an amateur.

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Date: 2008-11-01 01:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erinrua.livejournal.com
You did it. You actually did it. You gave us a Castiel reaction to Sam. I LOVE YOU! *glomphs!* This is brilliant and perfect, and I love Uriel and Castiel's silent communication, and I adore Castiel's simple and unexpected evaluation of Sam.

This? Is perfect. And it's now my canon until shown otherwise. *throws roses at your feet and chocolate at your muses*

:-)

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Date: 2008-11-01 05:35 pm (UTC)
ext_13391: (Default)
From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
*shivers* How beautiful! Such a perfect moment. I loved that that handshake could mean so many things.

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Date: 2008-11-02 06:48 am (UTC)
fufaraw: mist drift upslope (two blue)
From: [personal profile] fufaraw
Yes.

There had to be more to that handshake, and this seems very likely what Castiel's headspace might have been.

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Date: 2008-11-29 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paper-cranes.livejournal.com
Oooooo... I like what you did with this scene.

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