Mmm, only read the ones in the fandoms I know (X-men and Star Trek) but they were both lovely and fraught. I'm writing immediately post-Alcatraz in my X-Novel now and enjoyed your take on Bobby protecting John from everyone.
I adored Bones' line about not spooking the horses. Right in character, both from the point of view of the country background and empathy.
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Date: 2009-12-08 10:39 pm (UTC)I adored Bones' line about not spooking the horses. Right in character, both from the point of view of the country background and empathy.
Well done!