beta request

[tigriswolf]

So, I wrote an Inception/White Collar fic where Arthur and Neal are twins.  It has pre-fic character death and is very depressing and I'm most unhappy with it.  tigris_lilsis tells me it's too long and I'm not sure what to cut out.  Is there anyone willing to look over it for me?

Comments

[quiddative.livejournal.com]

I've seen Inception and I'm familiar with White Collar so I could take a look if you want. Not sure if I'll be able to help with cutting it down but I'll try :)

[tigriswolf]

Email is sent. Thank you!

[mynorthwind.livejournal.com]

I'd be glad to...I can turn on my old English-teacher-red-pen-eyes, or just my 'fic opinion. jamatters@gmail.com

[tigriswolf]

Email is sent. Thanks!