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tigriswolf ([personal profile] tigriswolf) wrote2007-01-07 12:00 am
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PMS bitchiness

The hell is 'instict'?  Dude, once is a mistake.  Twice is carelessness.

And the character's name is Carolyn.  Not Caroline.  They sound completely different.

I can't even get past the summary and there's seventeen reviews praising this?

There's not even a TITLE.  And the dialogue is punctuated incorrectly.

I'm in a pissy mood.  Sue me.

fic.

Summary: Riddick feels Fry slipping from his hand at the grasp of the evil alien, not knowing what to do he acts on instict and saves her, but was is instic or was it love?


And the aliens aren't evil!  That's like damning a lioness 'cause she ate an antelope.  Or a human for eating a cow.

And the summary is a comma-splice.

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Im Back! As u'll have noticed im changing the name to just 'daylight' cuz it'd be weird with the nu PB 2 movie coming out an all :O) ..... Riddick/Carolyn


And this?  Is NOT a summary.  I have NO desire to read this story.  I want to leave a scathing comment.