PMS bitchiness

[tigriswolf]

The hell is 'instict'?  Dude, once is a mistake.  Twice is carelessness.

And the character's name is Carolyn.  Not Caroline.  They sound completely different.

I can't even get past the summary and there's seventeen reviews praising this?

There's not even a TITLE.  And the dialogue is punctuated incorrectly.

I'm in a pissy mood.  Sue me.

fic.

Summary: Riddick feels Fry slipping from his hand at the grasp of the evil alien, not knowing what to do he acts on instict and saves her, but was is instic or was it love?


And the aliens aren't evil!  That's like damning a lioness 'cause she ate an antelope.  Or a human for eating a cow.

And the summary is a comma-splice.

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Im Back! As u'll have noticed im changing the name to just 'daylight' cuz it'd be weird with the nu PB 2 movie coming out an all :O) ..... Riddick/Carolyn


And this?  Is NOT a summary.  I have NO desire to read this story.  I want to leave a scathing comment.

Comments

[tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com]

LOL, yeah, I know. We got some prudes. I'm trying to fix it, but you do have other crossovers, my dear. LOL.

[tigriswolf]

Yeah, I know. But that one's my favorite.

[tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com]

Haha, maybe someday I'll get my own little corner of the site and we can put anything we want in there, LOL. Password locked or something.

[tigriswolf]

Ooh, nice. That'd be fun.

[tigriswolf]

If I click edit to change that complete/incomplete thing, will it be resubmitting the story?

[tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com]

NO, it won't. You gotta hit Add Story after you edit, but it doesn't resubmit. I've tried it. And even if it does. I can fix it. LOL. I'm She-Ra. I have the power.

[tigriswolf]

Thanks. Is She-Ra the green one?

Do I have to leave a comment to add something to favorites?

[tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com]

LOL, He-Man's twin sister. Muahahahahaaha!

[tigriswolf]

Is wincest allowed?

[tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com]

Not yet, but I'm working on it. Get some of your friends to sign up and vote in the poll, and I might be able to convince 'em that people want it. LOL. I know I want it.