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Title: On Phoenix Wings
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun.
Warnings: spoilers for everything; AU
Pairings: none
Rating: PG13
Point of view: third
Wordcount: 525

He’s able to ignore the pit in his stomach for almost a year. But as November second approaches—Mama’s death, Jessica’s death, Daddy’s death—something inside him twists and burns.

I healed you, that cold voice laughs. I gave you back your life for your father’s soul and an old gun.

He doubles over in the shower, gasping for air, tears brimming in his eyes. His voice is gone and he hears his heartbeat pounding in his ears.

Your father and I had a deal, It continues, and he feels an ice-cold touch on his lips. But Johnny has never been the one I wanted.

He wants to call out for Sammy but Sam’s gone, fetching food. He wants Dad back, Dad alive—I can do that for you, Dean.

Blood drips down his chest, slices opening in his skin. Make a deal with me, Dean, a binding agreement of blood and tears. I’ll give Daddy back and relinquish my claim to Sammy—if you, lovely boy, give me what I want.

He slumps down, heartbeat echoing loudly, gasping for breath—he can’t get enough air to fill his lungs, and blood keeps spilling out. Water pours from the showerhead, hitting his back, and the tub is slick against his flesh. The pain burns all over his body.

He’d forgotten what day it is. Wrapped up in Sammy, it slipped his mind.

November second. Day of death and blood and fire and tears.

I took Mary and Jessica and John—I stole your life and lit it aflame. Icy touch to his temple, above his heart, trailing along the gaping gashes. I killed your hope and destroyed your future. And now, Dean, soldier and brother, I offer you a chance to save your Sammy from my grasp.

Sam’s out getting food.

You’ve ignored me for nearly a year, Dean. But now the time has come. Give me what I want and I’ll release baby brother. Deny me and I take him forever. The shadow becomes visible, shapes itself into an almost-human form. Its lips twist as it kneels beside him, raises his head.

Blood still pours from him, sluggishly slowing down. He’s growing cold, losing his grip on consciousness.

He wants to see Sam again.

His voice is gone but he thinks, with all the clarity left to him, Do whatever. But let Sammy go.

Artic touch, whisperslick along his spine. Done.

Fire swirls around him but doesn’t burn. Laughter fills his senses, dangerous and deadly, and he sinks into the darkness, unable to hold his eyes open anymore.

He just wants to see Sammy again. Just wants to apologize for everything he’s done that embarrassed Sammy, that hurt him. He wants to say goodbye.

But he has no voice and Sam isn’t here.

So he slips into darkness and fire, and his heart stops as all his lifeblood flows out.

One more touch to his forehead, icy and hard. My boy, the shadow whispers. Welcome to the new world.

He doesn’t answer, can’t; fire roars.

Tell me, Dean. Tell me to take you.

Sam will be safe.

Take me.

Fire screams.

Sammy. 



Title
: Like Father, Like Son
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun.
Warnings: spoilers for “Folsom Prison Blues”
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 200
Point of view: third

Maura barely remembers the man that pulled her and Mommy from the cave. She was sobbing and Mommy moaning, both splattered with blood and gore. Daddy was never found, and Maura remembers how sad the man sounded when he apologized to Mommy for getting there too late.

Mommy nodded and pulled Maura close, thanking him anyway.

-

Looking into Dean Winchester’s earnest hazel eyes, she thinks back to that night, to the man with the sad gaze. They look alike, though she can’t recall that man’s name. They have the same bearing.

So she listens to him, really listens; there’s truth in his voice. He’s a criminal, but not a killer. Whatever he’s up to, whatever he needs that information for—

The man’s face flashes in her mind, Mommy’s screams and Mommy’s cries. Maura looks at Dean, looks hard and long, and knows what she’ll do.

-

It could ruin her, that she helped them. Hell, no doubt about it: her career in law is gone.

She calls up Mom after leaving Hendrickson a false trail and asks her to lunch the next day.

Mom says yes and they chat for a bit, then Mom tells her to go home and sleep.


Title
: promise not to stray again
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun. Title and cut text from “Jacob’s Dream” performed by Allison Krauss. (You really wanna be depressed? Listen to that song.)
Warnings: damn well better be AU for season three
Pairings: none
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 200
Point of view: third

He leaves at dusk, that last day, leaves Sammy behind in a fitful sleep. Bobby watches him go but doesn’t speak, doesn’t say goodbye or good luck, or you were a good kid, Dean, one of the best men I’ve ever known.

Bobby knows Sam’ll hate them both when he wakes, but this isn’t about Sam anymore.

-

Bobby makes some hot chocolate, wondering what Sam’ll do once he’s up. Go after Dean, that’s a certainty. But what will he do once he’s found him?

Because Sam won’t wake until it’s done, that Bobby knows. Dean made sure of it.

-

The sun rises and Bobby watches from the window. He waits for the Impala’s roar—in vain. Dean’s gone. There was no way out of that deal, no way Dean would take.

Sam stirs in the backroom.

Sunlight paints his yard, glinting off the car pieces. The dogs run around, playing and guarding, and Sam yells, “Dean!”

Bobby flinches. Sam storms through the house and out the door.

That day, Bobby doesn’t do much but pray.

-

Dusk comes, then dawn, and still no sign from either of John’s boys. Bobby knows they’re both gone for good.

He wishes he’d said goodbye.

 

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Date: 2007-05-28 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
First and third are creepy and painful, but it's the second I like best of all. The concept of her having been saved by John so now it all comes back and she returns the favour just makes me go all...fuzzy.

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Date: 2007-05-28 01:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theladyscribe
*cries* It's not nice to make your readers cry, you know. But oh, this is lovely and hurty, and you're right, that last one had best be AU, but oh god, I'm so afraid it won't be too far off the mark.

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Date: 2007-05-28 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixel-0.livejournal.com
Oh, I am so far behind on reading your fics, but these three were lovely. I'm always amazed on how much--emotion, plot, twists--you can pack into so few words. Always mind-boggling of the best sort. :)

Also, I noticed your tags. Wow. Just out of curiosity, do you know how many you have?

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Date: 2007-05-28 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Lovely job on all of these.

On Phoenix Wings

Ow! My poor Dean! But yeah, he’d gladly give himself up for Sam.

Like Father, Like Son

I really like the idea here of why Maura helped Dean, that John helped her family once and she saw that same kindness in Dean.

promise not to stray again

This one is my favorite, because I firmly believe that Dean would spare Sam the agony of that final day, would find a way to leave Sam behind and close the deal all on his own. I love how you used Bobby’s POV here. Each boy’s pain is clear even though it’s all filtered through Bobby.

Favorite lines:

Bobby knows Sam’ll hate them both when he wakes, but this isn’t about Sam anymore.

My poor, broken boys! *whimpers*

Dusk comes, then dawn, and still no sign from either of John’s boys. Bobby knows they’re both gone for good.

He wishes he’d said goodbye.


So, so sad. *hugs Bobby*

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Date: 2007-05-28 08:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
The first one is creepy, love the repetition of "I want to see Sammy" gives this frantic,desperate feel to it.

The third, resonates the most with me. It's so possible that Dean will disappear right before the last day comes, or even before that final day, but I just can't contemplate that happening. Hurts sobad.

And I like the second drabble too. That makes somuch sense and it's romantic somehow.

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Date: 2007-05-29 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com
it seems like the only things I have time to read nowadays are drabbles! *sigh*

Really loved these, but especially the last one - broke my heart.

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Date: 2007-05-29 09:38 am (UTC)
ext_13391: (psycosys)
From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
Nope, it's still not out over here. I'll be a good, law-abiding citizen and not download it. But I've seen you psoted your Shreck story, and that made me giggle like a schoolgirl. Next one will be penguin slash, right?

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Date: 2007-05-29 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sadelyrate.livejournal.com
Note: Words and my brain aren't on speaking terms. So if there's some insensibility ahead, that's why. (That's also the reason why I have Sub Rosa's next entries written and ready, but...there's something fundamentally weird about all three of them.)
Also: I'm rambling again. Sorry.

On Phoenix Wings hurts, hurts, hurts. Poor, poor Dean... You're mean, you know.
On the other hand, Kripke let that boy go and make a deal, so...you're in a good company. But still...
Damn it, Dean.
*sniffs*
*hugs Dean*

Um, there's just one thing: he can’t get enough hair to fill his lungs?
(And because it's apparently pretty damn late again according to my body, that was hilarious and so very wrong if only because the rest of that piece hurts.)

Like Father, Like Son is a delightful missing scene, even if I was at a loss at first as to who on earth 'Maura' was supposed to be. (I've seen that character named as 'Mara', and apparently I'm a bit slow today...)
I'd have liked it if the show had given us some sort of background for why she was so willing to help the boys. Granted, she was unsettled by the weirdness about the Winchesters, but...I hope we'll see her again.
In short, then, this one rocked. A lot.

Promise not to stray again...Stop it! No, wait, give us some more? How can you write these depressing, hopeless pieces so very beautifully and perfectly?
Damn you, girl, you make me so very conflicted.
Damn you, too, Dean.
Reading fic(lets) like this just makes me adore Bobby more than I already do, though, and...boys!
But that's exactly what Dean would do, if they'd run out of time to wriggle out of that deal.
And Sam...*sniff* break my heart once more, why won't you?

Warnings: damn well better be AU for season three

Amen to that, sister. But think about it. If the renewal of Spn for Season Four will become an issue, what better way than this to finish it?
(Granted, quarter of the fandom will kill their receivers, another quarter will off themselves, the third quarter will charge into Vancouver/Dawn Ostroff's apartment and the last quarter will stare in stupefied silence, shrug and move on.)

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Date: 2007-06-21 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanillafluffy.livejournal.com
Lovely and painful. Thanks for the heartache!

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Date: 2007-06-22 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pwcorgigirl.livejournal.com
Oh, these are great: frightening to uplifting to so terribly sad. I particularly like the depth of description in the last one. It's very vivid for so few words.

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Date: 2007-06-22 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] extraonions.livejournal.com
I loved all three of these, and I couldn't tell you which one got to me the most. But all are lovely, and heart-wrenching, and beautiful.

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Date: 2007-08-23 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virginie-m.livejournal.com
I haven't seen season two, but in spite of that all three of these hit me hard. In particular the last one which is just so sad. Lovely.

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Date: 2007-08-23 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virginie-m.livejournal.com
I know I know. But I live on the wrong side of the world and we don't have broadband!

But lovely Amazon are shipping me Season two when it's released on September 11. I can't wait.

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Date: 2007-08-23 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virginie-m.livejournal.com
I've been tricking myself by saying things like... Oh, it'll probably take a few weeks to ship... when I'm secretly hoping it'll only be a few days.

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Date: 2007-08-23 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kazlynh.livejournal.com
On Pheonix Wings...

*sob*

Poor Dean!!! Loved that one the most! Thank you so much for sharing!!!!

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Date: 2007-08-24 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ewanspotter.livejournal.com
Wow, that last one is just... haunting, and that first? Creeeepy.

Because Sam won’t wake until it’s done, that Bobby knows. Dean made sure of it.

I can so see it going down that way. Above all else, Dean would make sure to spare Sam of any more pain, and watching him die would just be out of the question.

Lovely job on all.

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