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Title: Smirk
Fandom: SN
Disclaimer: Not my characters.  Just for fun.
Warnings: AU for "Dead Man's Blood"
Pairings: wincest
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 163
Point of view: second


 

“We can have forever,” he whispers, trailing his fingers down your face. “Just say yes.”

“No,” you answer, shaking your head just a bit, not looking at him. His hands are cold on your skin and you can’t hear him breathe—a sound you’ve always known, even when he was all the way across the country.

“Sammy,” he says, pulling back and looking up into your eyes, and it’s a sin. It’s a sin he’s still so beautiful, and you hate him for it.

“You don’t call me that,” you tell him, trying to back up, to make sense of all this, and his fingers tighten on your chin. “You’re not him.”

And he smirks. NotDean fucking smirks at you, and it burns, it hurts so much, because he’s not Dean, but he is, and you just can’t do this anymore.

“Forever?” you whisper.

NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.


 

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Date: 2006-08-22 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] waka7.livejournal.com
*hearts* what remains despite all else, and the moment of surrender...
(Imagining what led here and what will come is part of the delight you are giving us here...Thank you!)

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Date: 2006-08-22 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] papered.livejournal.com
Oh, the pain of resisting... xD

Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 2006-08-22 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.

Ow. It's just so sad ... I know they'll be together now, but they're not supposed to be vamps. *whimpers*

Very well written and powerful.

Thanks for a good read.

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Date: 2006-08-22 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
But--at least they're together, right?

Yeah, but ... but ...

*whimpers*

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Date: 2006-08-22 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluesister.livejournal.com
Aren't you a busy thing!

Sad and the surrender at the end seems so likely.

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Date: 2006-10-08 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
I have just read them all and my god these were superb

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Date: 2007-01-04 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sora-chan44.livejournal.com
Wow that was fantastic. I loved it! Is it just a one shot? I would love to see more. :)

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Date: 2007-01-14 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimsonsenya.livejournal.com
This gave me the shivers!

I have to disagree with the comment above though. I don't care what Sam and Dean are, vampires, werewolves, zombies, as long as they're together. Because they're the two sides of the same coin, and nothing is sadder than them apart. /schmoop :)

Smirk

Date: 2007-01-15 03:32 am (UTC)
ext_71888: (Whoohoo)
From: [identity profile] koshweasley.livejournal.com
Damn, this is good. Sad, but good. The last line is just perfection.

Well done!

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Date: 2007-01-20 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zenamydog.livejournal.com
Scarey and sweet. Yep, i think Sam would follow Dean and visa versa, anywhere and into anything!

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Date: 2007-04-11 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassiakohn.livejournal.com
awwww who could say no to vampDean wanting forever? I know i couldnt

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Date: 2007-09-20 03:34 am (UTC)
ext_17092: heart shaped flames (Sam and Dean sad)
From: [identity profile] gestaltrose.livejournal.com
Love this, beautiful insight on the Sam/Dean dynamic.

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Date: 2007-09-20 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com
NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.

Perfect desciption of the boys - when they are together everything is right w/the world.

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Date: 2007-09-20 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerri-is-dead.livejournal.com
Perfect! I loved it! Adding to my memories!

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Date: 2007-09-20 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nevcolleil.livejournal.com
Oh. Wonderful. Such a short little bit, but it has everything a fic where one of the boys is vamped (and the other isn't) should.

“No,” you answer, shaking your head just a bit, not looking at him. His hands are cold on your skin and you can’t hear him breathe—a sound you’ve always known, even when he was all the way across the country.

“You don’t call me that,”


Perfect :) Great job. Thanks for posting this at [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]!

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Date: 2008-03-16 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] intensely-alive.livejournal.com
*sigh* so perfect.

<3

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