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Title
: you’ll someday see the truth from lies
Fandom: “Dark Angel”
Notes: for [personal profile] ladyjanelly, who requested Ben-fic
More notes: title from Plumb
 
            Of all the Outside, Ben liked the south the best. Down in Louisiana, old parts of the state, there were hundreds of thousands of churches with his Lady. They were safe, even the old and falling apart ones. She protected him there. She spoke to him as he slept in her sanctuaries, all along the Gulf Coast. 
            Ghosts wandered along the pews, telling him their secrets. Ben learned and grew in the Outside. He grew tall and ever-stronger, and his Lady kept speaking to him, telling him what a good soldier he was. 
            He basked in her glow. She loved him. Of all her children and soldiers and followers, she loved him best of all.  
            The heat was muggy in the south; it clung to him, enveloped him. After the cold of Manticore, he couldn’t get enough of southern Outside. Whenever he wasn’t in the Lady’s sanctuary, he’d stand in the sunlight or moonlight and soak up the heat, letting it fill him to his bones. Ben listened to the people and the creatures and the world, losing himself in the noise—no rhyme or reason to it, just life going about life. No rigid control, no iron-clad rules… no nomlies, no men with guns, no midnight captures and children never seen again.
            No nomlies in his Lady’s sanctuaries there in the south. Only him and the ghosts and the heat.
            He was happy there. But then his Lady spoke him and said it was time to go, to start giving her sacrifices. 
            She had opened her sanctuaries to him. She loved him.   He was glad to do as she asked.
            She loved him. She loved him best of all.
 

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Oooooh. Poor crazy Ben.

Thank you so much.

This was warming and chilling by turns. Awesome.

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Date: 2008-05-01 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dhark-charlotte.livejournal.com
Very, very excellent

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Date: 2008-05-01 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
That was great. I realize I've been a bad non-reviewer lately, but my exams have me pre-occupied. It's annoying because I really want to get writing more of my own fic. Fortunately they're almost done, then I'll go back and review all your recent fics. BTW, I left some new plotbunnies at the community.

I love when you write about Ben. I wonder if he ever ran into his other escaped siblings (Zack, Seth, Brin, Syl, Tinga, Krit, Vada, Jondy, Zane, and Kavi) before Max. Remember those Ben-centric ideas I had way back when? Ben/Drusilla, with Ben getting off on being bitten, and Dean as Ben and Alec combined.

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Date: 2008-05-01 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Thanks. And the plotbunnies and ideas?

Coincidence: Jensen Ackles' character in Devour is Jake Gray. Jared Padalecki's character in A Ring of Endless Light is Zachary Gray

Footnote: The character of Zachary Gray originally appeared in the books The Moon By Night, A Ring of Endless Light, A House Like a Lotus, and An Acceptable Time, by Madeleine L'Engle.

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Date: 2008-05-02 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
If you see Zachary Gray on the book cover shown here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vicky_Austin The resemblance is eerie.

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Date: 2008-05-10 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Notification email trouble?

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Date: 2008-05-10 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
No response to the two previous comments in this thread. Or were you busy and forgot? Whichever.

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Date: 2008-05-11 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Um, no. "And the plotbunnies and ideas?" definitely wasn't rhetorical, and some response to the image would be nice so I know that you've seen it and what you think. No big drama, of course.

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Date: 2008-05-11 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noybusiness.livejournal.com
Of course. Could you leave a comment on my recent plotbunnies community entry, please? There's been nothing, and nothing on many other people's entries as well, and it's almost creepy. Like a ghost town.

The resemblance between Jared and Zachary Gray as pictured on Wikipedia is striking, no? (edit: not rhetorical)

Also, could you please check out the most recent entry on my journal when convenient?

Many thanks.

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Date: 2008-05-01 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tempestquill.livejournal.com
This is beautiful and haunting. A very tender and gentle look into Ben's descent into madness after what Manticore did to him and all of the children. So many others could have turned out like him. It's just so tragic.

A very beautiful piece.

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Date: 2008-05-01 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creeno.livejournal.com
♥! Eeee, Ben. So much love, the image of him wandering old, derelict churches.

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Date: 2008-05-01 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creeno.livejournal.com
It's impossible not to love that little psycho experiment. ♥

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Date: 2008-05-03 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p3karen.livejournal.com
I really like it :)

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