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tigriswolfTitle: all the hollow deep of Hell resounded
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun. Title from John Milton
Warnings: spoilers for “Time Is On My Side”
Pairings: none
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 200
Point of view: third
Hey, sweetheart, he says, circling her with a shark’s grin. Long time, no see.
Not long enough, she tartly replies, spinning to follow him with her eyes.
You look good, he purrs and she’s not surprised. Hell itself hasn’t the strength to change this man.
Have you risen yet? she asks. She finds it odd that he’s still here. His brother should have gotten him out centuries ago.
Been to the surface and back, he answers. Lots of times. You?
She shakes her head. I have no bargaining tools.
He smirks. Just gotta know the right people, babe. Gotta have friends in high—low—places.
Ah.
He’s here, then? She hasn’t been nervous in longer than… well, a long time. But if she missed the coronation, then…
Her eyes fly to his. Yes, Dean says quietly, satisfaction threading the words. Sammy’s here. Lilith’s gone.
And you sought me out, Dean? Why?
His smile is vicious and his eyes turn black edged in gold. You sold us out while alive, bitch. You won’t get the chance in death.
Centuries in Hell have taught her torment. He shows her new meanings of the word, and her soul is cast into oblivion screaming.
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Date: 2008-05-09 04:13 am (UTC)Oh and I really liked the detail of Dean's eyes being edged in gold.
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Date: 2008-05-09 01:34 pm (UTC)Dean's not just any demon, you know? He's Sam's.
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Date: 2008-05-09 04:50 am (UTC)Yikes!
Yeah, evil!Dean and evil!Sam would have a field day with Bela. Great job writing the creepiness in this piece.
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Date: 2008-05-09 01:34 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2008-05-09 01:08 pm (UTC)*also speechless*
AWESOME.
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Date: 2008-05-09 01:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-09 02:39 pm (UTC)Thank you
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Date: 2008-05-09 10:04 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-09 02:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-09 10:05 pm (UTC)uhm...wow...
Date: 2008-05-09 03:30 pm (UTC)Re: uhm...wow...
Date: 2008-05-09 10:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-09 04:07 pm (UTC)I really like it.
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Date: 2008-05-09 10:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2008-05-10 01:05 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-10 02:41 am (UTC)Dean's not just any demon, you know? He's Sam's.
^ Demonicpet!Dean to Sam makes me giggle.
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Date: 2008-05-10 04:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-10 03:32 am (UTC)And Dean's eyes. *shakes head* The most delicious chills evar! Gorgeous, every word. :-)
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Date: 2008-05-10 04:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-10 04:20 am (UTC)Anyway, loved this, as I usually do whenever you write something.
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Date: 2008-05-12 05:33 am (UTC)Thank you for sating the voices. We'll come back for more later. :D
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Date: 2008-05-12 06:12 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2008-05-21 07:10 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-24 09:39 pm (UTC)No one really manages to write dark!Dean quite as awesomely as you, love.
*smishes*
Can't really feel that bad for Bela, either.
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Date: 2008-05-25 03:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-05-27 04:28 am (UTC)That one sentence is breathtaking, don´t ask me why, it's just is.
You do have a way with words :))) (claps happily because although Bela had her reasons she also had it coming the minute she hurt the boys ;)
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Date: 2008-05-27 04:10 pm (UTC)Personally, I think Dean should have killed her in "Bad Day at Black Rock," after she shot Sam.
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Date: 2008-07-26 06:39 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-07-27 02:37 am (UTC)