Gondor, calling
Aug. 14th, 2012 08:48 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tigriswolfSo, yeah. I just wrote this little drabble thing and was hoping someone wanted to read over it and tell me it doesn't suck? Like, I really like it. But it's kinda weird. Cute in the way anglerfish are cute, I think.
The warnings are: Improperly marked dialogue due to stylistic choices. Symbolism. Bullshittery. Character death, after a fashion. Suicide by way of mythological figures, too. Mentions of Odin’s A+ parenting.
And the pairing? *sigh* There isn't really one, but if there were... Yggdrasil/Jörmungandr. *facepalm*
It's 500 words. I'll probably put it on Ao3 tomorrow after work, after rereading it about a dozen times. But if someone else wanted to look it over and give me their thoughts?
The warnings are: Improperly marked dialogue due to stylistic choices. Symbolism. Bullshittery. Character death, after a fashion. Suicide by way of mythological figures, too. Mentions of Odin’s A+ parenting.
And the pairing? *sigh* There isn't really one, but if there were... Yggdrasil/Jörmungandr. *facepalm*
It's 500 words. I'll probably put it on Ao3 tomorrow after work, after rereading it about a dozen times. But if someone else wanted to look it over and give me their thoughts?