Hunter - SN fic - PG13
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tigriswolfTitle: Hunter
Fandom: SN
Disclaimer: not my characters. just for fun.
Warnings: spoilers for "Bloodlust"
Pairings: none
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 380
Point of view: second
Notes: I wrote this after seeing the episode only once. It doesn’t chronologically follow the order from the episode, but they all still happen.
Lenore's pov
Sam's pov
Dean's pov
You realize your mistake the instant the knife touches his throat.
You’ve heard rumors of these boys, Winchester’s sons. You even met Winchester once—he frightened you. He was dangerous, a true predator—and the stories say his sons are quickly following in his footsteps.
But it’s been years since you spoke to Winchester and the memories have faded. You’ve forgotten most everything except the gruff tone of his voice and the glint of his dark brown eyes.
Neither of his sons, you notice, have his eyes.
You watched them in the bar and you recognized them for what they are: like calls to like, after all. And they are good, the best you’ve seen since their father. The younger, though… something about him makes you wary.
And the elder—oh, yes, like calls to like. He loves the hunt, loves to kill, and when he killed that vampire—his father flashed through your mind and a thrill of fear shot up your spine.
If you could get him away from Sammy, he’d become the best, you’ve no doubt of that. Because Sam—he sees all sorts of shades of gray, and hunters can’t afford that. And he’s showing them to Dean.
So you cut Sam’s arm and drop the blood on the bitch’s face, and looking at Dean, you see you’ve completely fucked up.
His face… it’s blanker than when he killed the vampire. But his eyes… are so cold you shiver. His hands are steady on the gun.
You tell him that if you’d wanted Sam dead he’d be on the floor already, and his eyes darken.
And Winchester, you realize, was nowhere near as terrifying as his son.
In that instant, you know he wants to kill you. Wants to tear out your throat, carve out your heart, paint the walls ruby with your blood.
But he tries talking you down, tells you to let the bitch go, that she doesn’t need to die. He mentions your sister, your baby sister, and you snarl the rest of the story.
And you’d have sworn his eyes couldn’t freeze anymore but they do.
Dean Winchester is the scariest fucking bastard you’ve ever known.
And you really grabbed the lion by the tail when you so much as breathed in Sammy’s direction.
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(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-14 09:42 pm (UTC)And you really grabbed the lion by the tail when you so much as breathed in Sammy’s direction.
You damn skippy, nobody fucks with the lil' bro.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-14 11:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 01:03 am (UTC)I love that you make Gordon snarl at the mention of his baby sister. The man is in serious denial about his feelings about that.
And Winchester, you realize, was nowhere near as terrifying as his son.
Oh yes, this is the stuff.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 01:59 am (UTC)I think I have a slight crush on the second-person pov style for writing. I prefer it to first and third person. I don't know why.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-17 11:55 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:14 am (UTC)That episode totally blew my mind and you totally captured the spirit of it.
^_^
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:21 am (UTC)And Sam definitely needed some hugs.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:25 am (UTC)That's all.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:45 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:16 am (UTC)Favorite lines? Neither of his sons, you notice, have his eyes. and And Winchester, you realize, was nowhere near as terrifying as his son.
Excellent job. :)
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-15 02:18 am (UTC)Thank you for reading!
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 01:40 am (UTC)Ooo, this was enjoyable.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 02:07 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 02:19 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:08 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 02:23 am (UTC)Great job!
P.S. I hope we see more of Gordon in the future... you know, as kind of a lower bad guy of the sort.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:09 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading!
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 03:23 am (UTC)Dean scarier than John ... I can buy that. Excellent job.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:10 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 04:22 am (UTC)I'm of the same opinion, actually. Dean might have sided with Gordon, but then he went and breathed at Sam.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:11 pm (UTC)Gordon really wasn't all that bright.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 06:42 am (UTC)Too many great lines to count.
And Winchester, you realize, was nowhere near as terrifying as his son.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:12 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading!
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 07:28 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:13 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:03 pm (UTC)Because Dean would never, ever, ever be able to do that to family.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-16 12:14 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading!
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-17 11:51 pm (UTC)The Demon is so stupid for not being afraid of them.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-18 02:34 am (UTC)Thank you for reading!
(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-18 03:24 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-10-18 03:28 am (UTC)Everyone underestimates them. Even each other, the sillyheads.
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Date: 2007-08-22 03:22 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-08-22 04:44 pm (UTC)