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Title: Darling Abel, Damned Cain
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters just for fun.
Warnings: spoilers for season two
Pairings: technically, none
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 560
Point of view: third
 
 
          
            John learned the truth six months after leaving Dean without a word. He’d long suspected, but now he knew—
            Cain and Abel, Johnny, the demon laughed in his head as he drowned his suspicions and fear in alcohol. Cain and Abel.
            “No,” he said aloud. “No.” He drained one bottle and opened the next, taking a sip. “You’re wrong.”
            The demon laughed. You know as well as I do, John. Such a lovely story, those brothers.
            “Shut up,” John muttered, throwing the empty bottle against the motel wall.
            Your sons won’t have a better end. You’ve left them only one path. John, I couldn’t have done it better myself. It chuckled and his head throbbed with the sound.
            “I told you to shut up!” John tried snarling, but his words slurred.
            The chuckle swelled to a mocking laugh. Look at you, John. You’ve failed. Sam will be mine or dead—either way, I win.
            “No,” John denied again, a futile word that never changed anything, ever, no matter how loud he screamed it.
 
            John couldn’t hide the truth from Dean, not when he knew he’d never see his son again.
            So he leaned over Dean, newly awakened from his coma, whole and healthy, and he put his mouth to Dean’s ear, and he whispered the words that he knew sent his little soldier straight to Hell.
            Save him, Dean. Or destroy him.
            Save him, Dean. Or kill him.
            Kill Sammy, Dean. Or the world dies in his stead.
            Kill Sammy, Dean.
            As John pulled away, he heard the demon cackle.
            And Dean just looked at him, shock and horror and disbelief on his face. Worst of all, though, was the betrayal in his eyes.
 
            “He won’t do it, John,” the demon said, wrapping its host’s hand around the Colt. “You taught your firstborn too well.”   It raised its eyes to meet his, gaze full of delight. “The moment you placed the burden on Dean’s shoulders, you failed.”
            With his final breath, John wondered if that was his intention all along.
 
            Cain and Abel. Dean and Sammy.  Fucking demons and their fucking plans and their fucking destructive tendencies and the families they leave ruined by fire all over the country.
            Dean’s stronger than Cain and John knew it.
            Save Sammy, Dean.
            Dean’s never been jealous of Sam, not for longer than an aborted heartbeat.
            Kill Sammy, Dean.
            Dean could never kill Sam. But John doubted he’ll able to save him, in the end.
            Or the world dies in his stead.
            The demon cackled and a chill shot down John’s spine.  “Your boy will light the first match, Johnny,” the demon purred and John closed his eyes.
            When John stood over Dean in that hospital bed and could only see Mary’s eyes begging him to deny everything he just said, John knew he’d finally delivered the one order his perfect little soldier would never obey.
            “You did a marvelous job, John,” the demon murmured and John looked away. “You created for Sam the perfect protector—Dean will keep him safe and alive and follow him when Sam finally falls at my feet.” The demon touched his forehead and said, “I should thank you, Johnny. And to show my appreciation, I’ll let you watch until that time comes.”
            John sobbed.
            “Cain and Abel,” the demon howled. “Oh, this is too wonderful to be reality.”
            John prayed.

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Date: 2007-01-26 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sixxsixxsixx23.livejournal.com
Wow... this is scary good.

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Date: 2007-01-26 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Ok, this is...creepy. And claustrophobic. And taking away any hope anyone might have of redemption. Dude, when you angst, you angst. *goes to find chocolate for instant pick me up effect*

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Date: 2007-01-26 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] princess-gicky.livejournal.com
Dude --

Nice! Totally hooked! I could so see that and it ties in well to the story line you know. Poor Dean, he has such a job ahead of him. Well done, can't wait to see more.

-Nix

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Date: 2007-01-26 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanofmydreams.livejournal.com
Dean wouldn't turn out like Cain. He just wouldn't. I hope to find ut what happens, but I love this story. I want to know how John reacts to the end.

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Date: 2007-01-26 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mitchsgirl.livejournal.com
Oh, that was intense. I love the Cain & Abel analogy, but it sure is bleak!

And I actually think Dean would kill Sam, if he had to. Of course, then he'd blow his own head off, but I do think he'd do it. :(

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Date: 2007-01-27 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mitchsgirl.livejournal.com
Oh, you so could. I'm a little surprised you haven't already. :)

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Date: 2007-01-27 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thelonejuliet.livejournal.com
Oh...my...wow. That is...great. The Cain & Abel analogy is beautiful.

Wonderful. *grin*

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Date: 2007-01-27 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] batgurl10.livejournal.com
i am beyond speechlesss!! wonderful story. wow...i just dont know what to say...
u need to send this to that slashy writer, whats her name.

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Date: 2007-01-27 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atana-blackfox.livejournal.com
*nngghhhaaa* *shudder*

*goes to hide under my bed for a while.*

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Date: 2007-01-27 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Such sadness and despair here, such a sense of doom.

Nicely done. :)

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Date: 2007-01-27 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mneiai.livejournal.com
Ooh, very nice. I love the tragedy of it, and of John knowing it.

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Date: 2007-02-02 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
OH...Oh, MY!!!

That was...*is horrified* so wickedly BEAUTIFUL!!

*Gulps*

*Sniffles*

*Clings*

*Adores*

*hugs*

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Date: 2007-02-08 07:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dairwendan.livejournal.com
Cain and Abel - excellent analogy!
Poor John!
Thanks for this!

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Date: 2007-03-04 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1grl-revolution.livejournal.com
*shivers*

(in a good way!)

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Date: 2007-03-05 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la-bond-girl.livejournal.com
An excellent juxtaposition, this idea really pulls on my heart strings. Also, I simply love your title and this, "the one order his perfect little soldier would never obey."

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Date: 2007-03-11 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com
This rings way too true to be anywhere near comfortable. Damn John anyway. *grumbles*

;)

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Date: 2007-03-12 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com
You're welcome. :D

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Date: 2007-09-25 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-jamie.livejournal.com
Wow, I was scared and couldnt stop reading, really, really good!

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Date: 2007-09-26 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Oh this is just *perfect*

That demon would compare Sam and Dean to Cain and Abel when they're nothing like them.

Dean’s never been jealous of Sam, not for longer than an aborted heartbeat
John knew he’d finally delivered the one order his perfect little soldier would never obeyz


Powerful writing, there. I love it.

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Date: 2007-09-26 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sadelyrate.livejournal.com
This still amazes me. And it's still wonderfully wicked.
Thank You.

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Date: 2007-09-27 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erinrua.livejournal.com
Holy cow. You've got the YED's voice down so pat I feel like I should splash you with holy water! Though the YED didn't react when Sammy tried that, so ... ;-) But yeah. Dang. Thank goodness we know how very wrong the YED was, but this sure sets up how and why John found the sheer desperate strength to break out of hell. Yowch.

~ Erin

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Date: 2014-11-30 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khakigrrl.livejournal.com
Lookie what I just found. Wow. Are you sure you're not a psychic? Cain and Abel are Dean and Sam... in 2007? Brilliant.

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