first day - SN fic - PG

[tigriswolf]

Title: first day

Fandom: “Supernatural”

Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun.

Warnings: future!fic

Pairings: um… could be implied wincest, I guess

Rating: PG

Wordcount: 100

Point of view: third

Notes: written for whats_in_thebox, to the prompt of nothing gold can stay

 

            He watches the sun peek over the horizon. The sky is dark pink and purple and blue, with hints of gold and orange. It’s a cool morning, with a nice breeze off the Canyon. If it were any other day…

            The Impala’s hood is cold against his palm. His jeans are ripped, his shirt torn, hair still ruffled from his brother’s last touch. The space beside him, once filled with fire and life, is empty. 

            A part of him wants to lunge over the side, the car with him.

            He’s alone.

            The world feels barren, but the sun still rises.

 

 

 

Comments

[operagirl25.livejournal.com]

GUH. Loved it. Again too short, but so poignant.

[tigriswolf]

Thank you! I _can_ write long fics, I just don't do it that often. It's so much harder!

[operagirl25.livejournal.com]

I will read whatever you write. Period. :)

[tigriswolf]

*is not hinting* I have a fic tag. *really, isn't hinting at all*

[operagirl25.livejournal.com]

Oooohhhhh.....heh

[lunardreamed.livejournal.com]

Sam! All alone without Dean! Oh Sam!

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading!

[layne67.livejournal.com]

I love it that you don't really say which brother that was. From your tags I suppose it was Dean who died but it could easily have been Sam,too!

Lovely.

[tigriswolf]

Yeah, it's really up to you, but I figure it's Sam the day after Dean's debt comes due.

Thank you for reading!

[katriel1987.livejournal.com]

Ow. Now my heart hurts.

I _can_ write long fics, I just don't do it that often. It's so much harder!

No kidding. *glares balefully at nano novel*

[tigriswolf]

*sharpens stick*

*pokes*

[katriel1987.livejournal.com]

Ow! Did you *have* to sharpen it?

[tigriswolf]

Yup! Extra incentive!

[paleogymnast.livejournal.com]

You never cease to amaze me with how accurately you can both capture Sam and Dean and bring tears to my eyes in just a handful of words. Beautiful. Your drabbles are a true art form (and I'm not just saying that).

[tigriswolf]

*blushes*

*twirls you*

[pineapplejack.livejournal.com]

OMG, this fic is like a punch to the gut. The desolation and pain. ...I'm kind of afraid to read your long fics [when you post them] now as they are probably going to make me go cry in a corner.

[tigriswolf]

The longer fics are generally happier.

Thank you!

[unbreakableburr.livejournal.com]

Oh Sam. I seem to say that a lot in response to your fic. But Damn. ::sniff:

[tigriswolf]

Thank you!

[unbreakableburr.livejournal.com]

You're welcome!

[thegirlisfrail.livejournal.com]

Seriously, how do you do this?! I love that you can put so much emotion in such a little amount of words. Fantastic!

P.S. I'm friending you. :D

[tigriswolf]

Thank you so much!