PMS bitchiness

The hell is 'instict'?  Dude, once is a mistake.  Twice is carelessness.

And the character's name is Carolyn.  Not Caroline.  They sound completely different.

I can't even get past the summary and there's seventeen reviews praising this?

There's not even a TITLE.  And the dialogue is punctuated incorrectly.

I'm in a pissy mood.  Sue me.

fic.

Summary: Riddick feels Fry slipping from his hand at the grasp of the evil alien, not knowing what to do he acts on instict and saves her, but was is instic or was it love?


And the aliens aren't evil!  That's like damning a lioness 'cause she ate an antelope.  Or a human for eating a cow.

And the summary is a comma-splice.

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Im Back! As u'll have noticed im changing the name to just 'daylight' cuz it'd be weird with the nu PB 2 movie coming out an all :O) ..... Riddick/Carolyn


And this?  Is NOT a summary.  I have NO desire to read this story.  I want to leave a scathing comment.

Familial Relations chp6 - R - 1/2

Title:  Familial Relations
Chapter: VI. In The Genes
Disclaimer: Not my characters excepting the ones I thought up. The liar quote is credited to your_hero_died
Fandom: “Supernatural”/Devour crossover
Warnings: spoilers for seasons one and two of “Supernatural” and Devour; AU; het and slash; character death
Pairings: Ellen/Will; Gordon/Cade(Ash)
Rating: R
Wordcount: 12180
Notes: My knowledge of geography(including that of my own country) leaves much to be desired. 
More notes: Also, credit totigris_lilsisfor reading early parts of this and convincing me it was worth continuing.
Point of view: third


Chapter I: "Rapture"
Chapter II: "Bloodcall"
Chapter III: "Crystalline"
Chapter IV: "Genetic Codes"
Chapter V: "Blood Kin"

 

 

 

 

( When the time came, when he was tested, he was found wanting and he failed. )

part 2

Familial Relations chp6 - R - 2/2

Title:  Familial Relations
Chapter: VI. In The Genes
Disclaimer: Not my characters excepting the ones I thought up. The liar quote is credited to  your_hero_died
Fandom: “Supernatural”/Devour crossover
Warnings: spoilers for seasons one and two of “Supernatural” and Devour; AU; het and slash; character death
Pairings: Ellen/Will; Gordon/Cade(Ash)
Rating: R
Wordcount: 12180
Notes: My knowledge of geography(including that of my own country) leaves much to be desired.
More notes: Also, credit to tigris_lilsisfor reading early parts of this and convincing me it was worth continuing.

Chapter I: "Rapture"
Chapter II: "Bloodcall"
Chapter III: "Crystalline"
Chapter IV: "Genetic Codes"
Chapter V: "Blood Kin"


part 1

( When the time came, when he was tested, he was found wanting and he failed. )

Apparition - SN fic - PG

Title: Apparition

Fandom: "Supernatural"
Disclaimer: not my characters. just for fun.

Warnings: none

Pairings: John/Mary

Rating: PG

Wordcount: 240
Point of view: third

 

           

( Sometimes, when he dreams, he sees her as she was. )

Ten Books To Read Before You Die—with a bonus of Ten Short Stories To Read Before You Die

( Recs )